attempt at exhausting a place

Plein Air Café outdoor patio, 4:15pm
- Wind on wood
- Car exhaust, even at this distance from the road
- Bell tower chiming, can’t pick out a distinct melody
- Clinking of silverware on plates
- Someone clunking down on a wooden bench
- Steps on the stone path
- Crunchy walking across gravel
- “Now that I’m a sophomore, things are starting to speed up a little bit”
- Distantly, sirens
- Slamming the service window closed
- A white picket fence
- Dandelions growing wild


- White and blue table umbrellas
- Green tinted glass
- Beige wood on tables and benches
- Red on the edges of a decorative grass in a planter box
- Bright turquoise and teal on a man’s jacket
- Hot pink phone case
- Brown beer bottle
- Neon yellow, orange, and blue on sneakers
- A mouse peeked out from beneath a bush
- It ran away
- A woman’s wavy, gray hair shakes as she nods
- Inside, someone delivering food to a table
- Unknown clattering far to the right
- Door slams, taking out the trash
- through the tinted windows
- A tall man inside waiting to order
- The mouse just scurried inside the bushes
- Motorcycle noise from the road
- A man’s loud laugh from the right
- The mouse is behind the trash can,
- Out of everyone’s sight but mine
- Man in red jacket walking inside
- Bus squeaks to a stop on the road
- A bird somewhere far above in the trees chirping repetitively
- A barista calling out a drink
- The name kind of sounds like “Eeeeehhhh”
- Sirens getting closer,
- But still many blocks away
- A man reading on a tablet and his phone at the same time
- Black and white Nike sneakers must work here
- He just went in the back door
- The sun through the leaves of the tree turn them bright green
- Bells ringing very loudly
- A familiar melody, but I can’t name it.
- Someone taking off a scarf, getting ready to sit down
- Someone unwrapping a sandwich
- The paper crinkles
- The sun on the windows exposes their dustiness
- The tint hides the people inside
- Dandelion leaves wiggling in the air
- Even when the breeze is very slow
- Another drink called out
- Sounds like “Azzugaah”


- Person in shorts, sweater, airpods, and a brown leather messenger bag sits down with their to-go drink
- The fence on the street side of the patio is made of a honeycomb metal sheeting
- Another drink for “Jerry”
- Red jacket guy with white shoes clearing his glass and trash
- Another bird, but maybe a large bug, making clicking sounds in the tree
- The trash is being emptied.
- Something steaming in a white ceramic mug
- Something reddish in a glass cup with ice
- Inside, a white 12oz can of beer
- The pitcher of iced tea
- Someone bumping music with heavy bass in their car
- The clicking animal above me,
- A little louder
- A woman smiling, showing a man a picture on her phone
- Someone gesturing on the table,
- Hand moving from the left to the right
- Drink for “Emma”
- Someone calling to an acquaintance, “Maurice!”
- “You look like you’re gonna….”
- Someone taking out pens from a case
- One purple, one pink.
- Martín carrying a bottle of something red inside
- A person carrying a purse with a thick strap
- It has words on it
- Someone looking at a spreadsheet on a laptop
- Very very floral patterned pants
- The sun has moved
- The rectangle of light hits my feet now
- It feels warm.
- Person with the purse chugs water
- Woman with a tote bag and fleece jacket looking for a place to sit
- Drink for “Anna”
- No one responds


- Once again, “AaAAnnnnNuuuuhhhhh”
- Two people have moved to the same side of the table,
- Looking at something on a computer
- One is wearing headphones
- White and black Nikes walks around the patio
- He clears a forgotten plate
- “Anna” and company eat soup, bread
- They have discarded a plate with some salad greens left on it
- Man looking at a spreadsheet,
- Waves to an acquaintance in a blue quarter zip and black rimmed glasses
- Martín offers me a pastry
- I get a piece of banana loaf
- A large group approaches the door,
- They are speaking German
- One person has pink hair in two buns
- Drink for “Patricia”
- A green hose has appeared near the back door, leading inside
- A collective “oohhh” from out of sight
- The spreadsheet man sighs loudly
- “Oh god I wish!”
- Quiet honk from the street
- A man with a backpack and a white plastic bag throws something away
- Drink for “Lauren”
- Drink for “William” called inside,
- Then again through the service window
- Martín and someone else walking through the back door
- Martín carrying a gallon of orange juice and a gallon of milk
- A woman in a black coat and a bag with “Tokyo” printed on it in many colors
- “WiLLiaMM”
- A black dog on a harness
- Someone waiting at the window for assistance
- I think two people are speaking Japanese,
- They switched to English.
- A child runs to a woman in a pink shirt and a vest
- A paper bag is handed through the window to the person waiting
- The kid is sent back inside with instructions
- The dog hops up onto a bench
- Someone sitting by the window rubs their eyes, and continues reading a book
- Someone using the hose to wash off floor mats outside.
- They unroll one, wash it, roll it back up and lean it against the wall
- An exclamation from Spreadsheet and Blue Quarter Zip
- Barista through the service window pouring milk into a drink
- Drink for “Tobias”
- Drink for “Tobias” again
- Someone in athletic gear holding a pastry and drink, walking quickly towards the road
- White and black Nikes approaching a woman, taking her empty plate
- Drink for “Don” or “John” maybe?
- Two hot teas in to-go cups
- “It’s just, I’m not good at, like…”
- Crinkling of a paper pastry bag
- “What are you waiting on, sir?”
- “Uhh, a hot cider”
- Someone in a pink raincoat and a yellow hair tie going inside
- Person waiting for hot cider posts up next to the trash can,
- Staring at the service window, arms crossed
- Now pacing back and forth, hand on chin
- Someone walks past the fridges inside, blocking the light temporarily
- “Okay, he like…”
- A girl in a white button down and jeans
- Scarf on, backpack on, throwing away an empty cup
- “I mean, apparently…”
- “Just find an airbus”
- A woman gesturing to the person she is talking to
- Hands flat positioned on either side of her face,
- Then moving hands away from herself
- Drink for “John”
- Clear “J” sound this time.
- Back door opens,
- An empty black dish bucket is tossed to the ground
- Someone walking across the patio, waving to the woman in fleece
- White and black Nikes hands “John” two boxes of food
- The bells have not stopped playing
5:16pm. Pause.




